Sunday, August 5, 2007

Three minute draft of a story

No mom i swear to god were just friends!
Liz exclamed with frustration as she walked out of the door and jumped into Gavins red Dodge intrepid, she slid a CD into the sterio.
LIZZY!!! I havent seen you in so long why have you been so BUYSY!?!?! gavin said
Liz loved that about him, he would say anything to make anyone smile
Gav i saw you this morning
I know but i would never pass up an oprotunity to rhyme.
He smiled
Liz ruffled his brown hair
God! Your hair is getting LONG! Why hasnt your dad made you cut it yet!?
Gavins dad is an Air Force Vet and thinks that , and i quote, " Only Queer guys wear long hair! There all PUSSIES!"
Of course he is joking, he is a good guy, he just freaks if gavins hair touches his ears, or a collar of a shirt.

(Need a transition)

"WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SUBMARINE!"
Liz and Gavin were screaming with the mix cd he gave her for her birthday as they flew around all the corners of the road in Gavins car. Gavin sped up right before they hit Justin's hill. The only hill where you could get at least a foot and a half of air in that small town, and thats a big deal. Named after there firend Justin who broke an axel on his truck by flying over that hill. They flew over the hill and once they hit the ground the CD skipped like crazy.

Yes, they both understand screaming to the beatles is really corny but they dont care, its fun.

Turn at the next!! right Liz screamed over the music
WHY?Gavin yelled back
YOU'LL SEE!
FINE!
They turn into a HUGE empty parking lot it was hard to see out of the windshild the way it was raining so hard
YOU THINK ITS DARK ENOUGH? Gavin yelled back
OF COURSE ITS AT LEAST 9:00!
Gavin cranked the wheel all the way to the right and floored it THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST RUN OF DOHUNTS WE HAVE DONE ALL SUMMER!
Gavin yelled
They were laughing like crazy
Gavin's phone started ringing he saw that it was his mom
YOU ANSWER IT!He said ,
His mom didnt like it when he drove and talked on the fone at the same time
Liz flipped open the phone
Hello? Liz said holding back the laughter
Hey Liz! Is Gavin buysy?Well hes driving Liz said
Allright just tell him i want him to come home it is suppost to storm pretty bad in a few minutes, youre welcome to come over
Allright! I will make sure he gets the message! Byebye
Bye hun! Stephanie, gaivns mom, said
Hey Gav were suppost to head over to your house it is suppost to get real stormy pretty soon.
Gavin Flew the car into drive and burnt out of the parking lot, he slowed down when he looked over at liz, she was smiling at him and her face was so beautiful with the shine of the street lights. He wouldnt want to put anyone with a heart like hers into danger. He reached over and put his arm around the back of her seat.
So you want to stay over tonight? he asked
Hell YEA! We havent gotten in to trouble in Far to long! Liz said
She looked over at him and her insides melted, he is so close but so hard to reach.

(Just needs some fixing up)